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Jan. 12th, 2009 12:43 amPlaces I have started this story that are wrong:
1) with the abusive ex boyfriend, ie, before the story starts
2) with the college bit, ie, WAY before the story starts
3) with the tin man's ex-girlfriend, also before the story starts
4) with the two of them at lunch (in the action, and yet still before it.
5) in a yoga type class.
I'm starting it too early. Which I guess is part of the problem of not knowing where the story is going. Perhaps tomorrow I can try just writing things until i get where i need to be.
1) with the abusive ex boyfriend, ie, before the story starts
2) with the college bit, ie, WAY before the story starts
3) with the tin man's ex-girlfriend, also before the story starts
4) with the two of them at lunch (in the action, and yet still before it.
5) in a yoga type class.
I'm starting it too early. Which I guess is part of the problem of not knowing where the story is going. Perhaps tomorrow I can try just writing things until i get where i need to be.
