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tanaiseRevised The Goddess Afoot again. First time I've revised it, really. I had been trying to make it circular, but it confused everyone, so I fixed that. It should be less confusing in that way now, but I'm wondering if I made everything else more confusing with something else I did to cut down on the confusion. We'll see.
And I keep futzing with Clanless, and I'm not getting anywhere with the first chapter. I know it needs a new first chapter, because the one it has now starts with the wrong issues. And I know what it needs to start with instead--she has to get dumped by her boyfriend for not wanting to settle down, and told by her job that she's never going to make it anywhere unless she makes a lifetime commitment to the force. But I can't seem to make this chapter work. Hell, I can't even make this chapter start. Meh.
And I keep futzing with Clanless, and I'm not getting anywhere with the first chapter. I know it needs a new first chapter, because the one it has now starts with the wrong issues. And I know what it needs to start with instead--she has to get dumped by her boyfriend for not wanting to settle down, and told by her job that she's never going to make it anywhere unless she makes a lifetime commitment to the force. But I can't seem to make this chapter work. Hell, I can't even make this chapter start. Meh.
