Well, story four was critted today. It went a lot better than I thought it would. No one said it sucked, and most of the comments were along the "want more explanation" line, not the "ew, yuck, not a story" line. I got good compliments on the story too. So I'm happy. even though I don't know what story I'm working on next.
OKay, so I just went to read the journals, and got side tracked by Julian's page. I was thinking his girlfriend was imaginary, cause he talks about her, but no pictures. I was skipping around reading the different trips, but then in the Leeds bike trip story, there are actually some pictures of her.
OKay, so I just went to read the journals, and got side tracked by Julian's page. I was thinking his girlfriend was imaginary, cause he talks about her, but no pictures. I was skipping around reading the different trips, but then in the Leeds bike trip story, there are actually some pictures of her.