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I really need a new title for this story. "Fish Clan" is derogatory, which is sort of what the story is about, but not exactly, and not completely, so I don't really want to leave the title as it is--at the very least, it's going to need a little more there. I'm thinking about it though.
Today, as I had little-to-no work, I actually managed to be good and get a good bit of writing done. 1020 words, to be exact. Places marked with a # are places where I skipped something because I haven't figured that bit out. Things I do know: it's not who it would logically be, it may end up being just a random hate crime (ooh, or I could go with the angle I just thought of now, and we'll see how that works. hmmmm.), and Tajos, Chale's brother, will be showing up in the next few pages and probably making Eoin jealous. I haven't mentioned Eoin yet in the story, so I'll probably have to go back and do that.
I really need a new title for this story. "Fish Clan" is derogatory, which is sort of what the story is about, but not exactly, and not completely, so I don't really want to leave the title as it is--at the very least, it's going to need a little more there. I'm thinking about it though.
Today, as I had little-to-no work, I actually managed to be good and get a good bit of writing done. 1020 words, to be exact. Places marked with a # are places where I skipped something because I haven't figured that bit out. Things I do know: it's not who it would logically be, it may end up being just a random hate crime (ooh, or I could go with the angle I just thought of now, and we'll see how that works. hmmmm.), and Tajos, Chale's brother, will be showing up in the next few pages and probably making Eoin jealous. I haven't mentioned Eoin yet in the story, so I'll probably have to go back and do that.
