Well, I took down Clanless, as I'm sending it off to the long fiction anthology. When it comes back from there, I will revise it post-Clarion (as Ebear and Tempest suggested), and try ROF, probably. Seeing as 8300 words is too long for most places, and the ones it isn't too long for, I've already been bounced by. If I revise it enough, maybe I could try FSF again, but I don't know...that seems sketchy, as I still have the same hook.
Seeing as I then had an empty slot and no short story waiting to fill it, I dug back through my old stuff, and put up a story that the senior members will remember, Lost Boys. It may have been the first story I posted. Come to think of it, I think it was. I had an Ellen review of it, because of the title. :) But anyways, either because I didn't get a review that pointed out what I needed pointed out, or (and probably more likely) I didn't know how to follow reviews, I never got this story to click right. So I'm trying it again. Church has been brushed off again for another submission. I'm thinking I'll try FSF. Have to wait till my glamour shots come back though--don't want an incomplete submission, after all. ;)
Seeing as I then had an empty slot and no short story waiting to fill it, I dug back through my old stuff, and put up a story that the senior members will remember, Lost Boys. It may have been the first story I posted. Come to think of it, I think it was. I had an Ellen review of it, because of the title. :) But anyways, either because I didn't get a review that pointed out what I needed pointed out, or (and probably more likely) I didn't know how to follow reviews, I never got this story to click right. So I'm trying it again. Church has been brushed off again for another submission. I'm thinking I'll try FSF. Have to wait till my glamour shots come back though--don't want an incomplete submission, after all. ;)